As a business owner, I file packets like this in my recycle bin. Why? Because I can tell that this is only a copy that is going out to thousands of other business owners. For one thing, I have multiple business licenses, so I got multiple copies. But even if I hadn’t, I could tell that the sender has substituted only a few words—my last name, the word “office,” and the name of my company—because he forgot to change the font so all the text would match. The sender clearly hasn’t bothered to check that I am a ‘Ms.’ not a ‘Mr.’ And most telling of all, the sender forgot to take out the word ‘construction,’ and why would my publishing company need a construction worker? Does Hard@Work even employ construction workers, or is this a copy of another company’s proposal that they found on the internet?
I recognize that the person who created this proposal was not a writer but a copier. I have no doubt that Hard@Work Temps is sending the same package to thousands of other companies. As a matter of fact, I’m sure I’ll discover exactly that when I get together with local business owners at our next networking meeting.
Did receiving this packet inspire me to use the services of Hard@Work Temps? No way. It makes me think that if the company is this lazy and careless in sending out proposals, they’ll probably be that lazy and careless in all their business dealings.
I’m a professional writer and editor, and of course I re-use formats and basic information where it’s appropriate, but I start from scratch when I write and I always proofread carefully to make sure that everything I’m sending out represents me and is intended for my specific client. Copying someone else’s proposal would be like copying someone else’s homework—it’s not ethical and it’s certainly not professional, and some telltale sign is bound to be left—mismatched writing styles, the wrong word, a name that doesn’t belong.
Proposal Kit is designed around best practices, and one of those is that copying samples is not recommended. Any proposal writing book will tell you the same thing.
Proposal Kit gives you all the tools you need to create good proposals and other business documents. The editable templates are full of suggestions and examples for you to follow. The sample PDF documents are not editable, but they provide you with great ideas of how to create your own proposal. Take those ideas and do what the sample writers did—use Proposal Kit’s templates to generate your own proposal.
Proposal Kit gives you a big head start, but you need to do the work of creating a document that represents you and is designed for your specific audience. A copied proposal just won’t cut it when your proposal is not the only one on the client’s desk. If you are absolutely in love with a sample proposal, you can copy and paste the text from the PDF file, but you run all the risks I mentioned above.
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